For only five short, bold, beautiful minutes. Unscripted and unedited. We just write without worrying if it’s just right or not.
Today’s Prompt — VIVID
Joining with http://thegypsymama.com/2012/01/five-minute-friday-vivid
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As usual I read a few 5MF’s to see what others are writing about, a couple wrote about the vividness of the color of flowers and yes, I do appreciate that color.
My mind went another direction. I thought about the vividness of the memories of the first time I looked into my baby’s eyes.
#1 — Baby girl born 9 weeks early, tiny with deep blue eyes.
#2 — Baby boy born on his due day, looking like my brothers with blue eyes.
#3 — Baby girl born 15 days late, oh look, brown eyes like her father.
#4 — Baby boy born 10 days late, again dark brown eyes.
#5 — Baby girl born 10 days late, blue eyes shining and bright.
I can close my eyes and see their eyes waiting to. . . LOOK !
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I don’t have pictures available of baby eyes, so I’ll share this one of eyes all grown up and still looking.

